Archive - Apr 13, 2003

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mutant newspaper paragraphs

I was in a real bad mood yesterday when I saw my paragraph in the Hindustant Times yesterday. Almost all the sentences have been restructured and rephrased. I'm sure they did it to make it more concise, but for God's sake, what about the hard work that I put in to compose it?

Maybe it's because I've haven't had too much experience of being edited upon before, but it really hurt to see the words I framed after putting in so much thought being thrown all over the paragraph for the sake of conciseness.

Also, they didn't include it in the web version. I don'

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